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Lauri's Toybox

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Aaron Venture, Apr 17, 2018.

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  1. #21 Aaron Venture, Apr 24, 2018
    Ah. Gotcha. I also see now how can this be applied to my piece.

    Hey partner, when we're digging under a safe next time and the clock is ticking, I don't think you'd want me tellin' ya to hand me the digger thing. ;)

    Good example. Very simple. I tend to over-complicate things.

    Thanks, I'll probably go back to it soon and see if I can tighten it up in a few more places (on a second listen, trills in the march could use a bit more work), without having to scrap the entire thing and reset. The devil is indeed in the details.
     
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