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A Fairytale Wedding

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Luke Olney, Jul 30, 2017.

  1. #21 Doug Gibson, Aug 4, 2017
    Last edited: Aug 4, 2017
    Hey ! I really liked what you posted. You took it down, but I had a listen and thought it worked well. I liked the D#,E# to E bass motion you used, before hitting the Bmaj to F# Maj. It worked well.

    I don't mean to be a semantic asshole (just am) but the example Luke posted was not "really" a modulation, but more of a modal interchange. This is because
    there was only one chord out of the key. Unless..... I am thinking of a different spot and then I could be totally wrong.

    In a very general type example and trying to be helpful, I noticed your comment

    "Your modulation from Dmaj to F#maj is certainly a tricky move."

    It's not at all. You just have to break it down. I made a few quick examples. The thing about composing is aside from the craft of how you connect A to B is how you make it feel inevitable. This is more like a master story teller. Another way to say this: You can either "bang" modulate right on the spot, or you can do the more traditional building up (ie. secondary dominates ., 6/4 chords to sus etc.)

    I would say two of the most important aspects are

    1: Are there any common tones (F# is in both)
    2: 1/2 steps create a "leading tone" sense.
    3: Look at the liner aspect and keep common tones while moving other voices to nearest chord tone in next measure



    Some examples below. Just FYI. Groove on

    PS: What the hell is going on with the sheet music ? Don't click on if you have epilepsy. Twilight Zone ??

    Voice leading.png Voice leading 2.png
     
  2. Now that Mike has given me some feedback in Unleashed I'm going to revisit this over the next few days... I'd really like to get it as strong as possible so hopefully I can do that! Will post the results if I don't completely obliterate it ;)

    Thanks again for the feedback Mike, very helpful as always!
     
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