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Unleashed, before and after.

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Chris Morphitis, Apr 13, 2020.

  1. Hey all, let's start a thread showing our different before and after versions of pieces submitted to Mike's Unleashed event.

    It was such a buzz to take part in the event and I was high for days from the excitement of it all. But as much as I like the taking part in it all, making changes and editing pieces after the event is an interesting subject and throws up many challenges.
    Anyway, here goes..

    I submitted a piece on last year's Unleashed (Ep.5) marathon, it was called 'Late to Unleashed'.
    Mike's comments were really useful and I have recently tried to make some changes to the piece based on the critique. I would be really interested to know your thoughts on the changes I made.

    Here is the timestamped youtube clip of the first version


    And the new version (excuse the video images, did this in a rush and just grabbed a random vid taken from out of the back of my car!)
    https://youtu.be/2dAC1uy3m8s
     

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