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The goofiest thing I've ever written

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Duncan Formosa, May 27, 2022.

  1. It was my best friends birthday recently and his wife was putting together a little video of people leaving messages to him.

    She asked if I wanted to leave one which I said "of course" since he's my best mate...but I really didn't know what to say and didn't want to be boring just going "happy birthday, hope it's a good one."

    So I came out with this mega goofy tune 2 hours later and sent it over. He seemed to like it and was showing it around which was nice, so I thought I'd post it here.

    https://u.pcloud.link/publink/show?code=XZv9aHVZTbuJwbMr2tLVV1zvgNPLQ41W9Wrk
     
  2. I love it! Great job!
     
  3. Very interisting. The last 30 secs seem to me the actual chorus and it is pretty catchy.
    Have you thought about putting that earlier?

    Anyway, sounds like one of those quirky queen songs, congrats!
     

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