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Ride with the Birds

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Michael Lückgen, Jun 10, 2022.

  1. Hey Guys,

    I have made a new piece and tried to orchestrate it based on reference scores I have.

    I really like how it turned out, but if you have any tips to make it better, let me know!
    Any feedback is appreciated.

     
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  2. #3 Michael Lückgen, Jun 11, 2022
    Last edited: Jun 11, 2022
    Thank you Duncan, much appreciate it!
    Your feedback means a lot to me.

    I totally see your points. I was thinking similarly about both points when composing but decided to just go with it for now. But I will work more on these points in the next piece.

    As for the scores I used as reference:
    Mainly the Race, but also Benny Oschmann's short flight in a balloon and a bit of robin Hoffmann's Hero (last song which is called hero).

    Thanks!
     
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  3. I agree with Duncan, the second part of the theme could be more linked to the first rhythmically, the change feels a bit ubrupt. But you definitely have a good idea there.
     
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