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New Piano Sketch

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Michael Lückgen, Jul 18, 2020.

  1. #1 Michael Lückgen, Jul 18, 2020
    Hey Guys,

    I made a new thing. This time a real piano sketch ;)

    Originally I wanted to work on a bigger piece, which is supposed to be more energetic and much longer. But as soon as I sat down at the piano I felt like playing something more from the heart.



    I quite like the melody, but I am unsure about the B part. I tend to do such build ups a lot and it feels a bit uninspired to me by now.

    But anyways, what do you think?
    Would be glad about any feedback so I can improve :)
     
  2. #2 Michael Lückgen, Jul 19, 2020
    Last edited: Jul 19, 2020
    I added a bit more motion and made the B part less tensful

     
  3. #3 Mike Verta, Jul 21, 2020
    Something this simple should be easy to lock onto from the start. I'm lost by 15 seconds from the beginning; I can't find the beat. Try laying your A section down to a metronome.
     
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  4. #4 Michael Lückgen, Jul 21, 2020
    Thanks for your feedback Mike!

    I guess this may be because I shifted everything by a half beat at the 15 seconds mark. Without doing it it felt like the pause was too long. Didn't knew that it screws everything up :D
    Will correct that, thanks!
     
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