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Feedback request for piano improvisation over "yee"

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Bjarke Tan, Sep 7, 2020.

  1. #1 Bjarke Tan, Sep 7, 2020
    Hey I made a piano improvisation over "yee"
    Mine:

    Orignal:


    Feel free to give feedback on anything you notice.
     
  2. #2 Cody Ortz, Sep 13, 2020
    Definitely some interesting/cool harmonic ideas, especially there in the middle.

    My critique would be to try to organize the improvisation with more concrete ideas than just the right hand. Maybe an interesting left-hand rhythmic pattern that the listener can grab onto. Right now it sounds a little meandering (which I realize is sometimes the nature of improvisation) and having more structural building blocks can help orient the listener. That's something I'm working on myself!

    Cheers!
     
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