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Feedback on this Song

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Marian Szewczyk, Jan 12, 2020.

  1. This is actually my first attempt at writing an actual "song" in verse-chorus style. Basically, I wanted same raw melodic material, that can later be arranged for choir, orchestra, and more. Lyrics will also be added soon.

    For now, I wrote a simple piano arrangement. Basically, I would say it's finished, but I would like to hear your thoughts before I continue working with it.

    Piano sheet is attached. Thanks!

     

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    Michael L├╝ckgen likes this.
  2. Sounds very nice I don't really have any feedback to give other than that the ending seems a bit too sudden it might be better with a longer cadence otherwise I couldn't see anything wrong with the piece. Good job.
     
  3. Thanks pal. You're definitely right, and yes the ending will be different, at least in the orchestral arrangement(s). I already have something in mind, I just thought it was a bit too much to include in this "raw" version basically. Thank you for your feedback.
     
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