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Feedback for Action cue (Piano Sketch)

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Michael Lückgen, Jul 4, 2020.

  1. Hey guys,

    I tried to make a little action cue. It's all just a piano sketch for now.

    Would be glad about any feedback :)

     
  2. That is not a piano sketch. You have strings pedal tone. Until you force yourself to use piano, and two hands only, you will not truly understand the life-changing point of such an exercise.
     
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  3. Allright, let me try again:


    I did'nt play it in on time, since I am not that skilled in playing piano, but when thinking of the composition I played everything slowly.
     
  4. I think you did pretty good. When it comes to action cues it may help if you try to create a better sense of motion like you did around 0:45
     
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  5. I orchestrated this little piece here:


    I added a little bit more motion as you suggested.

    Overall I think The composition is could be better and I think I have difficulties in orchestration. I'm not sure when to double which instruments for better colors.
     

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