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Attempt at longer pieces

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Bjarke Tan, Oct 24, 2023.

  1. #1 Bjarke Tan, Oct 24, 2023
    I tried to compose something longer than i usally do.

    Any feedback is welcome.
    Thank you.
     
  2. #2 Nico Bellisario, Oct 25, 2023
    it is interesting and the main idea works.
    The bluesy thing that comes in tat 1:15ish is a bit out of no where and made me cringe a bit.
    You make good use of dynamics IMO, but I feel the tune stays always on the same rhythmic intensity which is fatiguing after a while.
    cheers!
     
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  3. #3 Bjarke Tan, Oct 25, 2023
    Thanks for your honest opinion! and good point about the rythmic intensity thing.
    Thanks for listening.
     
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