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Steel Ballroom (speed writing)

Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Aaron Venture, Apr 29, 2018.

  1. Thanks Paul, I'm glad you liked it!

    Short, but sweet!
     
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  2. Fair enough. Your second version is better and ovetall it really is a cool piece! My only complaint is there needs to be more if it!
     
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