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Discussion in 'Critique & Feedback' started by Kaan Akalin, Oct 9, 2018.

  1. #1 Kaan Akalin, Oct 9, 2018
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  2. Hey! I really really like the overall vibe of the piece but the complex harmony makes it very difficult to lock in with the melody and the form. Also I don't know the context and maybe it's the whole point but this is challenging your audience almost all the time. I think you could benefit to contrast with some clearer consonance.
     
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